Students today can easily access information online . so libraries are no longer necessary.Do you agree or disagree?

Students
can now easily access information on the internet;
however
, I believe
libraries
play an important role in society and for
students
, so their continued existence is essential. On the one hand, many
libraries
have become multiservice
centers
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rather than places for book reading and lending. The advancement of technology has had an impact on the improvement of library services,
such
as providing computer
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, IT
service
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, job vacancy notices, and government advertisements. In spite of
abundance
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the abundance
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of smart
device
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devices
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amoung
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among
the
students
,
other group
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of people
have
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not computers or smart devices.
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consequently
consequenlgy
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Consequently
they often use
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library
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libary
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library
to
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the internet
However
, despite the ease of access to the internet, reading ebooks, magazines, and newspapers still requires a monthly subscription, or readers must pay when they download them.Many
students
,
however
, cannot afford those costs because they already have to pay tuition, and while many ebooks can be pirated, users can be prosecuted because they are protected as intellectual property.In contacts,
libraries
offer free or low-cost subscriptions;
additionally
,
books
that are essential for studies may not be available online due to restrictions.There are many rare
books
in the reference section of
libraries
.
Libraries
are used not only by
students
, but
also
by the elderly and others; the older generation has a book culture, shares
books
, discusses novel friction, and spends their free time reading
books
and magazines in
libraries
with their counterparts; it is
also
a place where people who are interested in reading
books
can meet.
As a result
, if librarians are depressed, it can have a negative physiological impact on them. In conclusion,
libraries
provide many resources to the community, as well as rare
books
that are not available online;
additionally
, it is a
place
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where people with similar interests can meet;
thus
, I believe
libraries
should exist.
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  • accessible information
  • online databases
  • e-books
  • educational websites
  • community centers
  • physical books
  • literacy programs
  • peer-reviewed resources
  • misleading information
  • digital divide
  • high-speed internet
  • underprivileged communities
  • custodians of culture
  • archival material
  • conducive environment
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