Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is a common belief that leadership is given by nature.
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can be trained . Even though many traits of successful leaders are common and considered genetic, I believe anyone can learn to lead. Many famous leaders share similar qualities,
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as a strong tone of voice, charisma, and high self-esteem.
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creates the belief that by combining all these ingredients, everyone can easily influence crowds.
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, many political leaders, create an image of a strong, capable man only with their speeches.
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, there are lots of self-improvement books in the market about leadership. The improved technology and recent research projects around human psychology provided more information than ever.
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, people think that emotional intelligence is much more important than cognitive intelligence in the workspace.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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