Describe a tourist attraction that you visited in the past who, why, what, where, when etc

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of my best memories of frightened sensations that I always feel right whenever I think about it is the visit
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Disneyland’s Paris Park when I was about twenty years old. A friend received ten cheap entrance tickets from his works council and invited his closest friends to spend an amazing surprised journey at
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park on Saturday. I was very excited to meet some people that I had never seen before
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they were Chinese and my friend Jon was attracted to
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of them On the same day, I and Jon had a meeting at the station and took the train together towards Marne la vallée on the most crowded line in the Paris region. He told me he had met those people
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a Paris night party a
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months ago. Once we arrived in front of the park entrance, we didn’t wait long to go inside and run into Chinese people, in
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there are so many Chinese tourists who like visiting
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of the most beautiful cities
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the world. I felt rapidly friendly with the group and we started
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up for access to the different attractions
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as Space Mountain which is
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that gives the most thrills and another
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Toys Story movie. We were shooting big guns at moving targets,
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was really an unforgettable moment. We sometimes separated and reunite
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other in
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of the many parks on the site to rest and discuss everything or in a bar
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to drink or eat something and
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regain our strength.
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, I will always look at the magic of all the colours and shapes of Disney with the same eyes that I had in the souvenir shops at the time, namely with wide open amazed eyes.

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