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Do some people believe that teachers will be replaced by robots. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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although
 some argue that
robots
 will substitute for
teachers
, I disagree as I am of the view that human
teachers
 always will be required. some discuss that
robots
 will be in the place of
teachers
 as
technology
 is a panacea for all teaching ills. to illustrate it more, in
this
technology
 driven's world, everything will keep up with the speed of
technology
. machines can work far more effectively than
teachers
 and do not have the human
teachers
' weaknesses and negative emotions as
robots
 can be weariless and they never complain or get distracted and require minimal maintenance.
therefore
, by using
robots
 progress in
this
 occupation will soon gather pace. others,
however
, assume that real
teachers
 possess some chief features which fail to replace machines.
in other words
, kindness, compassion, and sympathy,... are some personal traits that
robots
 can not grasp their concept. it is obvious that a human can have far more understanding of a human than smart
technology
.
for example
,
teachers
 can easily figure out
students
 as a human have some restrictions and they are not able to rapidly learn all parts of lessons, especially in the learner stage of a topic.
as a result
,
teachers
 are more likely to be aware of
students
' requirement to learn better. I do believe that human
teachers
 can teach many other informative
skills
 to
students
by comparison
 with its future substitute. As quality
teachers
 often develop a strong rapport with
students
 and can be both authority and good friends it enables them to learn social
skills
 when they comfortability interact with their
teachers
 and
students
 so it can facilitate the expression of their ideas and makes them more self-confident.
however
,
robots
 do not have
such
 availability and responsibility for
students
.
thus
,
students
 can achieve some beneficial
skills
 when having a great human teacher. to sum up, by having an actual teacher we can have a greater environment in class for
students
 and teach life
skills
besides
 theories context.
although
 the benefits of robot
teachers
 are irrefutable.
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