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Nowadays many people have an unhealthy diet and do not exercise regularly. What are the reasons behind this trend? How we can encourage these people to live a health life.

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Citizens consuming unhealthy foods and not workout regularly are issues that are concerned
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many
people
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 in
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 present day. I will discuss why
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 is the case and will suggest some practical solutions. One of the major issues is that there are a number of
restaurants
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 that provide delicious tastes,
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, unhealthy for life.
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, fast food, BBQ and Shabu ; MC Donalds, KFC, Burger King, and Momo. I had a burger at Burger King with my colleagues for lunch yesterday because the restaurant is easy to find and the foods are delicious and easy to grab. In order to tackle
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 problem, the government should do something to ensure the healthy lifestyle of the population.
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 of all, most of these
restaurants
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 are imported from other countries.
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, The United States of America, The United Kingdom and Japan.
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, the state should increase taxes on imported
restaurants
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. Another concern is
people
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 do not work out regularly.
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 is because they have a lot of work and could not allocate their time to exercise. They may earn little money from their jobs.
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, they have to do many works to live their life.
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, Thailand is known as a low-cost-of-living country for foreigners,
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, when compared to Thai citizens, our standard income could not effort a basic lifestyle. Having a meal in shopping malls is
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 a special event. The effective solution is for government to boost
people
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's standard income. Once,
our
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 financially stable, we could have time to do many things like exercise. In conclusion,
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 essay examines two reasons why
people
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 eat unhealthy food and do not work out regularly; there are a number of unhealthy
restaurants
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 and
people
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 could not allocate their time
on
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 exercise due to
hard-working
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a hard-working
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 lifestyle. To tackle the
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, the solution is for the authority to rise the taxes on imported
restaurants
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. To address the latter, it is advised that
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the governemnt
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governemnt
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government
 should increase
people
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's standard income.
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