There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir, Good day. I would like to inform you that the problems with the
bus
assistance in my area over the
last
two weeks. There have been some problems with the
bus
duty, which was not good, especially it's quality of business in my area is not up to the mark.
In addition
, not only the timing of the
bus
use but seating in the
bus
also
is not comfortable indeed.
Moreover
, the behaviour of the staff is not good with the public. Some times shuttle service is so pathetic that it will not regular at the time passengers. My office timings will be at sharp 9 Am and the
bus
will not arrive at the
bus
stop by the time.
Consequently
, these sporadic timings will affect my office hours. In fact , the
bus
is very crucial for many people's day-to-day activities in my area . I would suggest your company need to take the action against the
bus
maintenance staff because of making problems with the
bus
service and inform your staff to maintain the proper timings for the shuttle account.
Yours'
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Yours
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faithfully, Ravi
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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