Some people think that a person improves intellectual skills better when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree?

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learn and how they can learn better ?

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kind of question has always been the theme for lots of discussions for a long time. Some people claim that intellectual

skills

can be honed better when doing

group

activities. I support

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notion and in the following paragraphs

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viewpoint.

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of all, any kind of activity is more interesting and effective when it is carried out in groups. And when it comes to improving intellectual

skills

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better results are guaranteed as

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a learner

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learner

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learners

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can exchange ideas,

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more chances to practice and learn from

other's

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mistakes

also

Secondly

one

feels respectively greater responsibility in learning as a

group

. Because

student

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the student

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doesn't want to feel ashamed before others

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much more, tries to do home tasks fully and can make some kind of conclusions for

himself

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seeing others' better result.

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, when

one

can improve his own

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knowledge

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with the participation of other people the improvement will not be in just

one

sphere that he is learning, but

also

in other spheres.

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group

activities are often not without making

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before

audition

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the audition

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working

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or working

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in small groups

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certain themes. And these all bring

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the improvement of other

skills

like presenting, working in a

group

analyzing

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and analyzing

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. To sum up, I believe that

one

can get better results when a student improves intellectual

skills

group

activities if he or she can exchange ideas, feels

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can

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analyze his and others' results.

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Topic Vocabulary:

intellectual skills
group activities
collaborative learning
critical thinking
problem-solving
communication
interpersonal skills
diverse perspectives
creativity
individual study
personal reflection
autonomy
learning styles
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