You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course. Say how much cooking you have done since the course. Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer.

Dear sir/Madam, Hope you are doing well. As you asked about my experience at cookery school. In my class, we were 10 students and all were very kind and cooperative. The best part of my experience was the nice nature of the teachers. They helped me to understand each and every aspect related to cooking. Apart from that, my subordinates were
also
good people. At
first
, I did not know a single thing about cooking but now I can make anything.
For example
, Recently, I made a delicious recipe which is liked by everyone in my family.
Furthermore
, I
also
made Gujarati food by seeing it on the internet. My experience was great at your place. If there will be more classes related to baking or cake recipes, it will inspire more pupils to learn them. I am
also
thinking to join these classes soon. I hope you will understand my point of view. Yours faithfully, Sandeep Kaur
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