Your friend invited you to his/her party, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •explain why you cannot come •give your reason for not contacting your friend sooner •suggest another time to meetWrite

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Dear Ann, I hope you are doing well. I'm writing

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letter to let you know that I won't be attending your party

this

weekend. Unfortunately, I tested positive for COVID-19

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days ago. I feel very sick and not in

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position to leave home. To be honest, I've never felt worse in my life. In a

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good that I tested, if not I would've spread the virus to others at your event. I am really sorry for the late notice. I know I should've informed you earlier, but I was stuck in the hospital. I didn't have any way of getting the message across to you sooner. I made sure to let you know as soon as I was discharged from the hospital. I feel very sad that I am not attending your party. I was really looking forward

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it. Can we please meet anytime during the

week, if I get better? I

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wait to give you the present I got for you. You will love it! Hope to hear from you soon! Lots of love,

Ramyen

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Ramen

Submitted by ramyensangheran12 on Tue Jan 17 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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7Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

184 words

7.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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