It is increasingly common for people to get the news from social media. Traditional sources of news like newspapers, television and radio are becoming less popular. Why is this so? Is it a positive or negative development?

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In recent years, the usage of the
internet
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to spread the
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has been widely accepted and the consequence is
people
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have started to neglect old-style
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,
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as newspapers or television. In my opinion,
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it will draw numerous benefits, there are
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many drawbacks we should consider.
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with, social
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is eligible to spread the
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swiftly and reach
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range of
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. As long as receivers
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active
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an active
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internet
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connection, they can obtain the shared video or text.
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,
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from America may get
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a message
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messages
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from
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a citizen
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citizen
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in Indonesia in
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blink of
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an eye
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, using social
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means we could get a bunch of information through one time of scrolling since everybody on the
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can share information, regardless it is true or false. The more source the more we can calibrate the occurrences.
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, if the majority of
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said the forest fire was caused by unresponsible
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, and
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the minority
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said that it was ignited by
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a lightning
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,
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we can conclude that
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must take responsibility
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this
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disaster.
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, a lot of consideration we need to take care of,
such
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as
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and negative
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. The simplicity of
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a report and there
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no
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of the content can lead to misunderstanding or fake data. Hoax sometimes is
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used as
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an issue
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distraction for
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politicians
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or
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businessmen
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, to
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the genuine one.
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, negative or hate speech may become
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the common
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thing we find in the social
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timeline.
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this
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kind of thing will lead
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growing hatred. Hatred
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toward
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certain
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will make
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stop to develop, yet just focus
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people
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. All in all, we should
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media
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social wisely, since we can get much
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faster
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,
nevertheless
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,
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hoaxes
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and negative
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also
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become a thing we should consider while
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on the
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • real-time updates
  • fast-paced
  • diverse voices
  • perspectives
  • convenience
  • interactive nature
  • engage
  • misinformation
  • public trust
  • journalistic standards
  • echo chambers
  • critical thinking
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