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.80 add physical
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the curriculum for pupils, While others think that
children
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time
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Although
,
physical activities contribute
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believe that it's more appropriate to spend school hours on more
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subjects where essential knowledge
be gained.
On the one hand, adding
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classes
contribute to
children
's health conditions and power. If pupils do sport at least at school, they might become much
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stronger.
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able to provide trainers, which are
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proficient and rigorously
, and high-level gyms.
For example
, in Israel physical
education
lessons
are based
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trend of healthy residents. I,
however
, believe
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growth.
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lessons
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children
's field. Extending
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which would be spent on
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education
is
moreCorrect article usage
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approach rather than expanding hours for physical
education
. Despite
a lot of parents
also
wish more appropriate method for growing
children
. As an example, in Russia PE
classes
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once a week while other
time
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on
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lessons
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vast understanding of world
and wide-range knowledge. I think,
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for PE
classes
.
In conclusion, despite expanding
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spent on physical
lessons
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think it would be much more
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lessons
.