Every country should have a free health service, even this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Many countries aim
to
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for
mandatory
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health
care, although
there are modern medicines that are not possible to provide because of their much cost. I absolutely agree
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withagree
this
politic. In spite of nowadays there are a lot of abilities to get an insures
service in Replace the word
insurance
medicine
, also
there are many people who have
not enough money to pay fees. Add a missing verb
do have
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it is Add a comma
,Besides
a
duty of Correct article usage
the
government
to provide the right to Correct article usage
the government
health
for every citizen. This
essay gives the reasons of
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such
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.
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Firstly
, It is possible that pour person gets into a situation when
he Correct word choice
where
need
some Change the verb form
needs
medicine
but he has not any
insurance. If there Add a missing verb
have any
are
no Change the verb form
is
any
free Correct quantifier usage
apply
service
it leads to Fix the agreement mistake
services
worst
of his condition, Correct article usage
the worst
result
in coming more Wrong verb form
resulting
emergence
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cases
then
was
before. As a consequence, the government have to pay more for saving his Unnecessary verb
apply
health
from chronic illness and other fees to support pour are increase
significantly. Wrong verb form
increased
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Recent
Public
Clinic of Astana illustrates that more than 90% of Correct article usage
the Public
stuff
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staff
supports
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support
the
free Correct article usage
apply
medicine
.
Secondly
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service in country
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the country
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a doctors
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doctors'
doctor's
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to old illness causing in Correct your spelling
compared
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decline of Add an article
the sustainable
a sustainable
period
of adaptation in common life. Correct article usage
the period
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apply
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of money Replace the word
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on
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research Correct your spelling
recent
of
Astana University, that during the latest quarter of Change preposition
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a century
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medicine
declines an average in
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apply
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medicine
became.
In conclusion, I believe in mandatory free medicine
because it helpless
to individuals and by the way at large saves Add a missing verb
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the
money and Correct article usage
apply
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a result not too expensive.Correct word choice
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