Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.

Nowadays, it is claimed by several
people
that individuals have so many options. I strongly opine with
this
idea because of some reasons which I am going to explain below. In the modern day, habits of
people
and
life
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standards changed with the developing technology, strikingly. When it is compared
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the past,
people
's requirements to move their life are increased in a visible way. If it is observed individuals who lived in past, their life was so basic. Most
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people
were unaware of many things and
people
were living to live.
For example
,
people
had no idea about mobile
phones
and the internet approximately 20 years ago and at the present time, tons of cell
phones
are being produced daily and more than half of the
world
know how to use cell
phones
and reach to internet.
In addition
to
this
,
people
can choose their own cell
phones
from many different models by their own requirements and be able to modify
phones
by their own wishes
such
as colour etc.
Furthermore
, the modern
world
is designed regarding
to
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young generation's desires. By developing technology, governments and investors are able to take heed of
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needs from all over the
world
and at the same time individuals can easily reach
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countries' and
governments
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needs and be able to improve themselves regarding
to
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these requirements.
For instance
, many young modern students have a number of opportunities to enter any kind of
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,
institutes
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, and
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in foreign countries. The students can choose one of the options by their own wishes and abilities. In conclusion, I believe that choices and opportunities are growing with
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time
therefore
people
should think carefully and decide for their own profit while
also
considering our
world
's benefit.
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  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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