Many people feel the urban encivronments are more unhealthy than they have ever been What do you think are the main causes of the problem? What measures can be effective in tackling this problem ?
Nowadays because of the
urbanitation
, Correct your spelling
urbanisation
people
are moving from the village to the big city, and it cause
the population in the urban area are growing really fast. That phenomena lead to various problem Change the verb form
causes
such
as unhealthy
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an unhealthy
environtmet
. In Correct your spelling
environment
this
essay
I will explain in detail about Add a comma
,essay
cause
of the problem and some Add an article
the cause
solution
to handle Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
this
situation.
To begin
with, in urban
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the urban
area
nowadays Fix the agreement mistake
areas
people
have their own vehicle
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vehicles
such
as car
and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
motorcycle
for everyday use. It Fix the agreement mistake
motorcycles
play
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plays
biggest
part Change the article
the biggest
of
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in
the
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apply
air
pollution not like
the Change preposition
unlike
people
who live in the village that still use bycyle
or Correct your spelling
bicycle
riding
a horse that Wrong verb form
ride
have
0% of pollution. Change the verb form
has
Next
would be too many electronic device
that Change to a plural noun
devices
are
not Change the verb form
is
environtmental
friendly, Correct your spelling
environmental
environmentally
for
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an example
example
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,example
air
conditioner
that in Fix the agreement mistake
conditioners
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the tropic
tropic
country Replace the word
tropical
people
must have that
at least one in each Correct pronoun usage
apply
house
. The air
conditioner
make
the Change the verb form
makes
environmental
warmer Replace the word
environment
then
before. Replace the word
than
Also
the many Add a comma
,Also
skyscrapper
that newly build play Correct your spelling
skyscraper
skyscrapers
bigger
role Add an article
a bigger
then
home usage.
Some Correct your spelling
than
solution
could be done to make Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
healthy
urban Correct article usage
a healthy
environtment
. Correct your spelling
environment
First
, government
could encourage Add an article
the government
people
to take public transportation by providing easy and cheap choice
like a bus or MRT. By that action, Fix the agreement mistake
choices
government
could prevent Add an article
the government
people
to use their personal vehicle
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vehicles
to
the office and reduce Change preposition
in
the
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apply
air
pollution. Second
, to reduce air
conditioner
usage people
could make a green
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greenhouse
house
. Add an article
The green
A green
Green
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Greenhouse
house
is the
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a
house
that designed
to absorb light and still cool on the inside, so it could reduce Add a missing verb
is designed
user
of Correct article usage
the user
air
conditioner
and make the Fix the agreement mistake
conditioners
environtment
healthier.
To sum up, even though there are many ways to solve the issue above Correct your spelling
environment
such
as encourage
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encouraging
people
to take public transport and build a green
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greenhouse
house
, it is always from individual awarness
to protect our Correct your spelling
awareness
environtment
. Not only that, Correct your spelling
environment
government
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the government
also
play important
role to make it happen.Add an article
an important
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