Over time, as children grow older, the relationship they have with their parents changes. In your opinion, what role should parents have in their adult children’s lives?
Parents
are a crucial part to
children's upbringing as they are their main example to follow. Change preposition
of
However
, in child's adult age
their roles change completely as they are not anymore the ones who make decisions. Add a comma
,age
This
essay will explain the role that parents
can play during adult
stage.
Add an article
the adult
For
Change preposition
During
this
new period
they can turn into their friends and be at their side while they progress. They do not need anymore someone who decides for them but a mate with whom they share their ideas and concerns. Add a comma
,period
Moreover
, they could be the best advisors for them as they have lived all their growth and development as a person. For example
, they might help them to decide major
choices Change preposition
on major
as
their degree. Change preposition
for
Nevertheless
, they should never judge their selections.
In addition
, another important part they can take is being a mentor for them. Parents
have already lived many experiences and they are the best teachers for their children as they will want the best for them. They can speak from the voice of the experience and try to guide them in their personal and professional life. For instance
, while the time of seeking a job, parents
often advice
them to reach jobs not only to earn money but Replace the word
advise
also
to be able to learn.
In conclusion, when children are nomore
kids, Correct your spelling
no more
more
parents
are not
anymore their basis for living. Correct your spelling
no
Consequently
, they have to be their companions in this
new travel and give them all the necessary support for becoming the best version of themselves.Submitted by teresa.babio on
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