Some believe that in many nations, it is necessary to spend a lot of money to build new railway infrastructure for fast trains between cities. Others feel that the government should spend money to improve existing public transportation. Discuss both of these perspectives and give your opinion.

Dear Franklin,
I’m
surprised to receive a gift from you on my birthday, so
I’m
writing to thank you for
this
lovely demonstration of love and care.
I’m
in tears since I got it in my hands! Most of my birthdays I use to celebrate with my family and friends by going out or making a party with them, but
this
year as
I’m
living abroad I didn’t feel to invite a coworker or a classmate to an event, because the connection with them is so superficial since I moved away only two weeks ago. Receiving
this
video with all of you sending me positive energy to my
next
cycle around the sun filled me with joy. Yesterday, I have been given one chocolate box by my manager in the Office, and in the evening, during an art class, my teacher read me a poem in front of the other students. I was delighted but
also
shamed as everyone was facing me waiting for a speech which I didn’t give. At night, the feeling of loneliness took over my body and I couldn’t do anything but cry on the bed. I’d rather stay there with you
instead
of here at
this
moment, but I know how important is
this
internship to my career. So thank you again for
this
lovely present that I won’t forget. Looking forward to catching up, Best wishes,
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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