Some people are in favour of opening more sports centers at multiple accessible locations, while others put their weight on the other measures
The diagram illustrates the stage of the factory products instant
noodles
. All in all, it is clear that there are 8 steps of noodle
manufacturing. Each step can be catagorized
Correct your spelling
categorised
by
two main stages (raw Change preposition
into
noodles
material production and noodles
packaging).
To begin
, The manufacture
provides raw Replace the word
manufacturer
noodle
materials which is
Change the verb form
are
main
proceeds in Correct article usage
the main
this
stage. Such
as Flour are
stocked at Storage silos before it is mingled with water and oil in Mixer to produce Dough sheets. Following Correct subject-verb agreement
is
this
step, the noodle
dough will be striped then
Correct word choice
and then
turning
into Wrong verb form
turned
discs
form. The Change the noun form
disc
last
but not least, this
step conduct
the final shape of instant Correct subject-verb agreement
conducts
noodles
by cooking it
with oilCorrect pronoun usage
them
,
and drying Remove the comma
apply
throughout
the pan.
The Correct pronoun usage
it throughout
second
main stage is packaging noodle
, and Fix the agreement mistake
noodles
get
ready for containing. The Discs Wrong verb form
getting
noodles
wrap
together with Vegetables and spices in Cups. Wrong verb form
wrapped
Finally
, The Instant Noodle
cups ready
to distribute after it is sealed and Add a missing verb
are ready
putted
Correct your spelling
put
label
.Wrong verb form
labelled
Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!