Many children have become habitual about excessively using mobile application day and night. Why do you think this is so ? What parents can do to avoid this situation declining further ?

The rapid development of technology has dramatically changed our standard of living

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while abusing

smartphone

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among

children

has become

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for an enormous number of

parents

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factors

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to

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phenomenon and it is time

parents

concerned took proper steps to stop

this

trend.

To begin

with, it is undeniable that

children

have fewer abilities of self-control compared to adults, which means that they are more likely to be attracted by the diversity of content that mobile applications can deliver.

In contrast

to reading books, smartphones can usually present information in an interactive and efficient method.

Furthermore

, using mobile is handy since nearly everyone carries a smartphone in their pocket and they can just pull it out anytime when they want as result,

this

behaviour has become habitual.

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phenomenon

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a detriment

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to the growth of young and

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should control

this

trend by restricting the hours of cellphone usage. The majority of smartphones have a feature called parent mode. By setting up

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on

children

's smart devices,

parents

can easily limit the time of

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.

Parents

can

also

shut down the

accessibilities

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of selected applications

such

as TikTok, youtube or Netflix that could attract

children

's attention. In conclusion, the excessive of using smart devices is absolutely detrimental to the growth of teenagers. Hopefully,

this

trend would be eliminated in the near future by practising the possible solution discussed in

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