More and more people are opting for readymade food instead of freshly home cooked food. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

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hotpocket

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hot pocket

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food

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instead

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of

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home-made

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dishes. The main advantages of these are that

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home-made

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food

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is healthier and these healthy

habbits

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habits

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down to our children;

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, the drawbacks are obesity and suffering from chronic

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. Eating

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dishes is a healthier way of living to maintain our life stable.

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, few people have time to make

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at home, so making

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space for cooking is vital for our health.

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, these vital habits are going to

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to our children who will learn to make healthier choices

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eat without feeling they are suffering by living in a healthy way.

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, in undeveloped countries, society

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great health condition because they eat organic vegetables and the

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is prepared fresh at home every day.

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, individuals who like to eat readymade

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tend to suffer from obesity because

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type of

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is too greasy and sweet. To

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with,

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food

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is cheaper and tasty, so people tend to consume more

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because it is accessible, so they

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overeat. Another disadvantage is that these

type

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of

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also

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lead to chronic

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such

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as diabetes type 2 and heart attacks because

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food

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is full of oil. To explain

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, In The United States most

of

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the

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adults tend to suffer from chronic

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because readymade

food

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is cheap to

acquiere

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acquire

, so people who work two jobs love to consume

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food

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. To conclude, in order to have

a great healthy conditions

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a great healthy condition

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, one must

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eat fresh and healthy

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food

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;

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, those who love readymade

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tend to suffer

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multiple

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and being obese, so to avoid the drawbacks that

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food

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might bring to our bodies, society

need

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to make wise choices.