Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we are no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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I will discuss each aspect and express my opinion. On the one hand, today the number of advertisements is countless. We live in a cyber age where
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are watching different videos on YouTube countless
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can be annoying and annoying. So, many
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and quickly skip to other videos. These
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are a bad influence.
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, advertising plays a hood role in increasing the sales of
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. It attracts and makes it easier for
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to achieve something.
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massage
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provide convenience and at the same time are useful for
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in today’s stressful work
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message helps to relieve stress. So advertising plays a food role in persuading
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to purchase.
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some applications
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consumption and it can be an opportunity for anyone who is concerned. To sum up, advertising can be found everywhere
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it can be unpleasantly normal,
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’s needs and they purchase willingly. I think there are positive and negatives to
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me want to be during but sometimes it annoys me.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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