Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we are no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that the large rate of

advertisements

which

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to convince

individuals

to purchase various

merchandises

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have increased, while others think that,

advertisements

have become

one

of

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integral

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of our life

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it has become so common that we even do not know the presence of

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advertisements

. From my point of view, nowadays

advertisements

are considered

one

of the advantageous

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for entrepreneurs to introduce their products. In

this

essay, I will discuss both viewpoints in a depth. On the

one

hand, some people believe that

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advertisements

are considered

one

of the major

factor

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which encourages

individuals

to purchase certain products

since

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these days as

internet

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the internet

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has become

one

of

the

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integral

part

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of our life, majority of the

advertisements

take place on social media networks.

Furthermore

, digital

advertisements

on the internet have created

a significant opportunities

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for businessmen to introduce their products to

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society which can

also

be a great deal of success.

For example

, nowadays majority of the entrepreneurs try to increase their economy by releasing

advertisements

in a digital format.

On the other hand

, other

individuals

think that it is almost impossible to notice

advertisements

since they have become

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common in recent years,

in addition

to

this

, recently produced

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’ design is almost the same

therefore

most people are ignoring them since

individuals

always desire new things which they have not seen before

as a result

of

this

watching the same common way of

advertisements

sometimes can be an issue because humans do not usually like the same thing which is represented again and again. To conclude, having weighed everything mentioned up, I can come to the conclusion

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that, companies can have a number of advantages by advertising their goods,

however

,

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it can

also

be considered a matter of annoyance.