Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we are no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many
humans
argue that advertising is the best way to encourage individuals to purchase a new goods
while some Correct the article-noun agreement
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humans
strongly believe that advertising is very widespread currently. Therefore
, many people
are not paying much consideration for
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humans
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products
.In the following paragraph, I will discuss the circumstances on each side and provide my opinion as well.
On the one hand, it is a frequent topic of discussion that advertising is
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people
to buy their produce. Firstly
, many companies can achieve much success by to advertise
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, they can attract a lot of Correct your spelling
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people
. Moreover
, this
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products
are brought to people
via advertisement. For instance
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this
year, 70 per cent of the products
people
use the most are heavily advertised.
On the other hand
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products
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Furthermore
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them because of the proliferation of Change preposition
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low-quality
For example
, when humans
watch television or visit a website, ads are displayed which makes them bored with ads.
In conclusion, many individuals say that advertising encourage
to buy unnecessary things. Other Change the verb form
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that it causes Correct your spelling
feel
people
to spend a lot of time.Submitted by Premium Version on
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