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many people say that a person`s success is a result of the way they have been brought up by their parents

#people #person`s #success #parents
It is true but many
parents
 are overly permissive and tend to spoil their
children
, In my opinion,
this
 is not
good
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a good
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pareting
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parenting
 style, and it can have a range of negative long-term consequences. I think that all people agree with
this
.
To begin
 with, If
parents
 want to raise respectful and well-behaved
children
, I believe that a certain amount of discipline is necessary.
Parents
 should not spoil their
children
children
 should develop themselves and tell them no when they want something in some events when they behave badly and try to trespass.
This
 is the only way to help young people to regulate their desires and develop self-control. In my opinion,
who
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those who
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 do the opposite and constantly give in to their
children
's demands are actually doing more harm than good.
For
example
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,example
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 my friend's sister when she was little
she
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apply
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was very pampered and when she grew up and she cared about the feelings and needs of others.
In addition
, to succeed
their
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in their
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children
parents
 must strictly raise their
children
 if they pamper it can lead to
negative
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a negative
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side
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sides
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.
In spite
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Spite
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of
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thisof
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, one
consequences
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consequence
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 of
such
 an attitude can
that
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be that
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 these teenagers which pamper they are unable to work successfully in teams with
others
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other
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 colleagues in the future.
This
 may lead
for example
, to unrelated ongoings, unwise financial decisions, or even criminal activity.
For instance
, my
parents
we
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apply
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will be raised strictly to be successful in the future. In conclusion,
parents
 should help their
children
 to develop self-control and respect for others,I believe that
parents
 will raise their
children
 and achieve their goals
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