Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we are no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

•In our modern life, commercials have been developing almost every day, and the majority of individuals emphasize that advertising is one of the

most

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best ways to persuade us to purchase creations. Other

humans

point out that advertising is extremely widespread currently.

Therefore

, many

humans

do not pay more concentration

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it. From my point of view, promotions are a more beneficial way to purchase high-quality

goods

. In

this

essay, I will discuss both points. •On the one hand, advertising has

becoming

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well-known day-by-day because it is the best successful way for

the

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buyers and many big companies prefer advertising their new products in order to introduce their

goods

for

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inhabitants through the internet and

advertise

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advertising

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gives a big opportunity for large organizations to increase

number

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the number

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of purchasers.

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, in my country, every 15 minutes,

ads

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are broadcast, which is a great way to save time, even if it is expensive, and now the

number

of internet users

are

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increasing.

Therefore

, announcements are becoming popular. •

On the other hand

, others strongly believe that, nowadays, all corporations prefer advertising their wares through social media to sell all their products.

As a result

,

this

leads to an increase in poor-quality endorsements.

Besides

that, the large

number

of ads while using social networks makes users

irreted

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arrested

, and as the

number

of commercials, the quality of the advertised

goods

decreases, and

this

causes people to lose trust in commercials. •In conclusion, the majority of

humans

say that advertisements are the biggest factor in the development of big companies and it gives opportunities for people to purchase high-quality

goods

. Other

humans

emphasize that announcements are becoming less reliable

day-by-day

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and people do not pay much attention to them.