In the last century when a human astronaut arrived on the moon, He said "it is a big step for mankind". But some people say it makes little or no difference to our daily life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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was

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physically visited by man, it was considered a huge

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at that time. Nowadays, some people think that wasn't

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an important finding. In

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essay, I will write to what extent I agree or disagree with the affirmation that the

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of the

moon

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wasn't

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a utility.

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with, some people believe and had believed that

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a finding was extremely important because it permitted the

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of a new possible part of the university where humans could live.

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, new resources have been found there, that today are used to cure some diseases,

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as cancer.

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, the fact that man could visit the

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has opened space to new forms of technology,

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, the born of computers.

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, some people don't see any visible improvement in their daily lives, after that

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.

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, those who were poor before the visit

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the

moon

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,

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remained poor after that.

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, some diseases,

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as the

above mentioned

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above-mentioned

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cancer, still exist. To conclude, even if,

generally

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thinking, seem to not to be any effect

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to

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the

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of the

moon

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, I agree with the affirmation that, that

discovery

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changed our life. In fact, after that many other

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discovery

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were made, so at least that brought an increase in willingness to improve.