In the last century when a human astronaut arrived on the moon, He said "it is a big step for mankind". But some people say it makes little or no difference to our daily life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When the

moon

was

first

physically visited by man, it was considered a huge

discovery

at that time. Nowadays, some people think that wasn't

such

an important finding. In

this

essay, I will write to what extent I agree or disagree with the affirmation that the

discovery

of the

moon

wasn't

such

a utility.

To begin

with, some people believe and had believed that

such

a finding was extremely important because it permitted the

discovery

of a new possible part of the university where humans could live.

Furthermore

, new resources have been found there, that today are used to cure some diseases,

such

as cancer.

Further

, the fact that man could visit the

moon

has opened space to new forms of technology,

for instance

, the born of computers.

Nevertheless

, some people don't see any visible improvement in their daily lives, after that

discovery

.

For instance

, those who were poor before the visit

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the

moon

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remained poor after that.

In addition

, some diseases,

such

as the

above mentioned

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cancer, still exist. To conclude, even if,

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thinking, seem to not to be any effect

consequently

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of the

moon

, I agree with the affirmation that, that

discovery

changed our life. In fact, after that many other

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were made, so at least that brought an increase in willingness to improve.