You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue till late night.

Dear Mrs Jenny, I am writing to you to apologise about
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I invited my classmates and we want to lead the
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outside till midnight. At night we are planning to turn on
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because some of us want to
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, from your sleep. And I will promise
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, I would be happy if you are visit our house the
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by heart. I believe that you will be happy after all. I understand that it might be difficult for you to accept my apology, but I have
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way.
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faithfully, George
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