some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. what is your opinion about this? what other time in history would be interesting to live in?

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is a good
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idea
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. We
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don’t know,
in
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personal
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, really how we can live.
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we were used to
know
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how
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with the problems we had
day
by
day
. Could be easy living in a
time
where you know every
day
we have
new
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thing comes, the
tecnology
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technology
these
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without
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can follow, but
also
you can use your
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. Even the people thinking are have thought same as mine. Couldn’t be hard living in another
time
, because you must be learning again how
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with people,
probaly
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probably
the population had another kind of life and think
tottaly
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totally
different
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differently
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from just now. I
am agree
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the best
time
to live is now, a can not
to
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think I living
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time
.
also
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I love living in a
time
I
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have a new challenge every
day
. About living in another
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in
the
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history, I would love to live in the
70
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70s
’.
The history
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show
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how
the
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live
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life
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as
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is
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so free
this
make
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feel
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me feel
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so
exciciled
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excited
and
also
make
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me up
,
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because too much freedom can be dangerous.
I
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In
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my opinion
with
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you are able to live, have a life, you can live any
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in
the
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history. We
are
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will
having
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the challenge every
day
, happens saddnes, just a live we might deal with
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thing just
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unprecedented
  • prosperity
  • technological advancements
  • global connectivity
  • longevity
  • opportunities
  • self-expression
  • renaissance
  • exploration
  • industrial revolution
  • roaring twenties
  • unparalleled
  • groundbreaking
  • transformative
  • revolutionary
  • epoch-making
  • flourished
  • transcended
  • innovations
  • distinguished
  • renaissance artists
  • explorers
  • innovative entrepreneurs
  • exhilarating
  • era
  • unforgettable
  • boom
  • vibrant
  • exuberant
  • transformed
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