On a recent holiday you lost a valueable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company.
Dear sir or madam,
I'm writing to you because I lost my vintage golden ring during the island holiday. Luckily, I have travel insurance and it supposes to cover all my losses, the registration number is WS45WE682.
I lost the ring which is belonged to my family for 5 generations, the oldest daughter takes it when she is 21. I just took it 1 year ago and I've already lost. I talked to the hotel manager and called the police to find that ring. I am sure, I took off and put it into a drawer before I went to the ocean. The police still researching it
however
, I don't have any hope.
The ring's price is approximately $10.000 yet it could be more than that as it is a unique handmade vintage ring. I think an expert could define the real price and I'm sure you will help me.
Yours faithfully,
Elif Beyza.Submitted by ebeyza34 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite