On a recent holiday you lost a valueable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company.

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Dear sir or madam, I'm writing to you because I lost my vintage golden ring during the island holiday. Luckily, I have travel insurance and it supposes to cover all my losses, the registration number is WS45WE682. I lost the ring which is belonged to my family for 5 generations, the oldest daughter takes it when she is 21. I just took it 1 year ago and I've already lost. I talked to the hotel manager and called the police to find that ring. I am sure, I took off and put it into a drawer before I went to the ocean. The police still researching it

however

, I don't have any hope. The ring's price is approximately $10.000 yet it could be more than that as it is a unique handmade vintage ring. I think an expert could define the real price and I'm sure you will help me. Yours faithfully, Elif Beyza.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

154 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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