you would like to borrow a good camera from a friend. write a letter to your friend - ask your friend if you can borrow the camera - explain why you want it and when you will return it - se when you won't eat in when you will return it

Dear Franklin,

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pleased to hear that you´re living in the same city as me, it’s been a long time since I saw you, so

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writing to ask you if you can lend me your professional camera for a few days. As you maybe be aware,

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working in the Gold Coast Hostel, the one in front of Tiger Beach, the manager hired me as a digital content creator, a great opportunity for me, but unfortunately, I don’t have a good gadget to take some photos of the building and accommodations, for

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reason, I was wondering if you can do me

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Saturday, 1st April. On

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day, an event will be held in the Hostel Garden, and I want to do some registers to show that beyond breakfast and bedroom,

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place is for those who want to socialize as well. If

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project works properly, I can request a better position on the team. If you let me use your camera,

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certain that I will do a great job! Looking forward to hearing your response, Best wishes Pollyanna

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Jan 19, 2023

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you would like to borrow a good camera from a friend. write a letter to your friend - ask your friend if you can borrow the camera - explain why you want it and when you will return it - se when you won't eat in when you will return it

Some people prefer to work for a large company, Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe holding sports events are too expensive, such as olympic games,and the world cup. But others think in opponent way. Discuss both opinion, and give your own view.

Some people think that being able to communicate with others online is breaking down geographical barriers and enabling people, who would normally never have the chance to meet, to communicate. What are the advantages of international communication online? Are there any disadvantages to this?