In the future it may be necessary for us to live on another planets.For this reason ,Some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be possible home ,such as Mars.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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past decades it has been believed that we should spend money to search

different

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planet

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as our home to live in near future

such

as Mars.

Although

there are several reasons to leave

this

planet

,I

am totally disagreed

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with the statement.

Therefore

I will give reasons for my opinion in

following

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essay.

Firstly

,as

humans

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we have created climate changes. As a result of industrialisation ,carbon dioxide emission is rising rapidly.Most

of

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the countries like India, China and Russia release green gases beyond the control level.

This

is the major reason

of

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climate change which affect

man kind

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vigorously. But not only humans but

also

the

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innocent animals are suffering from

this

issue.

Although

man can seek another place to live animals are incapable of doing it. So it is unethical to leave without thinking of those environmental creations.

This

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factors support my disagreement and we can take measures to reduce co2

emission

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rather than escape from earth.

Secondly

,let's think that we will find another

planet

to live

,but

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only rich

citizensfrom

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citizens from

developed countries

such

as

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UK,

USA

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will get

chance

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to go there.What will happen to people of poor countries,they will have to face upcoming issues .There will be huge competition among

personals

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to acquire a chance and only wealthy individuals may win.So it is not a practical answer to leave

this

planet

earth without seeking possible solutions. To summarise,

although

there is a belief that we will have to leave

this

planet

in future I am disagreed to spend more money on that.Before searching

another

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place we should find ways to reduce climate

changes

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and make

this

planet

earth is

better

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a better

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place

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to live.