You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:

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Dear Mike, Good day. I am writing
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to inform you that there are many problems with
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room arrangement and very difficult to study. As I said there are many problems are associated with the room which I shared with another student.
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, I found poor ventilation in my place and
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, the lighting facility is not up to mark. Indeed, not be able to focus on my academic studies due to the sporadic vicinity of the tube light. I would request you focus on the maintenance part of not only the washrooms but
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the corridor lounge. Indeed, the corridor is fully infested with swarms and had a couple of rusted doors which will lead to septic for the people, who will roam around it. The painting of the walls is not in good condition. Please focus on the accommodation part of the area. Hope you will consider my request. I would like to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Ravi
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