Smoking should be banned in all public places "Do you agree or disagree with this statement?"

Many

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choose to

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despite having clear knowledge

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the adverse effects it has on their

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. In recent years, a ban on smoking on public properties has been put in place; but

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does not include all social settings, there are still many facilities where

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can still

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. In

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essay, I will argue that smoking should be prohibited in all public

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as it affects smokers, non-smokers and the

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alike. One argument that supports banning smoking in public spaces is that smoking affects the

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around you. A large majority of

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actively choose not to

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due to the negative

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impact it may have on their

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, including, clogging blood vessels, lung disease and even cancer. When non-smokers go out to public

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as parks and more confined areas like some cafes and bars, they risk inhaling the harmful substances coming from the

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cigarette

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of

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around them.

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can be a nuisance and repeated exposure could result in them developing the very

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problems they are actively trying to avoid

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it is argued that passive smoking is equally as bad, if not worse, than active smoking.

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, a ban on smoking in all social settings will protect those that do not

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restrict

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cigarette use, which in turn will have a positive impact on their

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and the overall

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of the community as a whole. Another key reason that prohibiting smoking in all public properties is advantageous is that it will benefit the

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. Cigarette

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not only affects human

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but

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has an impact on

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air quality- toxic chemicals

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as carbon monoxide are

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into the surrounding area.

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, birds and other wildlife can inhale these fumes, which can lead to detrimental

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outcomes for these small animals.

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, cigarette buds cause an

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in scenic public

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as they are not safely disposed of.

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, they are littered on fields, rivers and lakes. These buds are

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eaten by wild animals in the area; exposing them to more toxic substances.

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why the more extensive the ban on smoking is, the safer and cleaner our

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will be. In conclusion, it is my belief that

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a complete prohibition of smoking may seem restrictive, the

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accessible to

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, the less often

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will

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will benefit their own well-being,

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well-being of others and

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a healthier

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for all.