Smoking should be banned in all public places "Do you agree or disagree with this statement?"

Many

people

choose to

smoke

despite having clear knowledge

on

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the adverse effects it has on their

health

. In recent years, a ban on smoking on public properties has been put in place; but

this

does not include all social settings, there are still many facilities where

people

can still

smoke

. In

this

essay, I will argue that smoking should be prohibited in all public

places

as it affects smokers, non-smokers and the

environment

alike. One argument that supports banning smoking in public spaces is that smoking affects the

people

around you. A large majority of

people

actively choose not to

smoke

due to the negative

long term

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impact it may have on their

health

, including, clogging blood vessels, lung disease and even cancer. When non-smokers go out to public

places

such

as parks and more confined areas like some cafes and bars, they risk inhaling the harmful substances coming from the

cigarrette

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cigarette

smoke

of

people

around them.

This

can be a nuisance and repeated exposure could result in them developing the very

health

problems they are actively trying to avoid

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it is argued that passive smoking is equally as bad, if not worse, than active smoking.

Therefore

, a ban on smoking in all social settings will protect those that do not

smoke

. It will

also

restrict

smokers

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cigarette use, which in turn will have a positive impact on their

health

and the overall

health

of the community as a whole. Another key reason that prohibiting smoking in all public properties is advantageous is that it will benefit the

environment

. Cigarette

smoke

not only affects human

health

but

also

has an impact on

the

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air quality- toxic chemicals

such

as carbon monoxide are

release

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into the surrounding area.

Similarly

, birds and other wildlife can inhale these fumes, which can lead to detrimental

health

outcomes for these small animals.

Moreover

, cigarette buds cause an

eye-sore

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in scenic public

places

as they are not safely disposed of.

Instead

, they are littered on fields, rivers and lakes. These buds are

then

eaten by wild animals in the area; exposing them to more toxic substances.

That is

why the more extensive the ban on smoking is, the safer and cleaner our

environment

will be. In conclusion, it is my belief that

although

a complete prohibition of smoking may seem restrictive, the

less

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places

accessible to

smoke

, the less often

people

will

smoke

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this

will benefit their own well-being,

the

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well-being of others and

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a healthier

environment

for all.