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some people believe that charities should help people in need no matter where those people are in the world/ Others feel that those organizations should only serve the people living in the country where they are based. discuss both sides and give your opinion

#people #charities #matter #world #organizations #country
The table illustrates data about figures of
people
 who visited Ashdown
Museum
 before and after renovation while the 2 charts give information on the feedback of those who went to the
museum
 twice. Overall, most individuals visited the
museum
 after refurbishment.
Also
, prior to renovation, a high percentage of
people
 were dissatisfied while after renovations the same number of individuals were satisfied.
To begin
 with, before the
museum
 was developed, a majority of
people
 were dissatisfied and some were satisfied with 40 and 30 per cent respectively. Those who were very content were 15%, and 10% were very dissatisfied while a small percentage of 5 did not respond. Coming the year after Ashdown
museum
 was developed, the figure of satisfied and very satisfied
people
 increased. With the former going up by 10%, from 30% to 40% and the latter rising up by 20%, from 15% to 35%. The number of those who were dissatisfied prior to the renovation dropped significantly by more than half, from 40% down to 15% . The ones very dissatisfied
also
 dropped the percentages by half from 10% to 5%. In both times 5% of those under the survey did not respond.
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