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In many countries people now wearing western clothes such as suits and jeans rathers than traditional clothing

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In numerous nations, individuals presently wear western
dress
such
 as suits and pants
instead
 of conventional clothing. From my point of view,
this
 has positive and negative sides. My opinions and examples will be discussed in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, it is elegant to wear Western countries' clothes.
Firstly
, some people, especially kids are under the impact of worldwide media. For occurrence,
youngs
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 are taking after famous celebrities,
such
 as singers,
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and
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actors. Teenagers take them as part models and try to become like them.
In addition
, modern
dress
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dresses
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 are moderately inexpensive since of their production
in
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on
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 a bigger scale. In
this
 way, it has ended up
a
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suitable choice for
open to wear
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open-to-wear
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 stylish wear.
Оn
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On
 the other hand, it contrarily influences our conventional
dress
. Since our traditional
dress
are
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 passed down from generation to generation
this
 ought to be acknowledged. In case we conversation almost in vogue
dress
, at that point interior they have torn jeans, half-open shirts and other things like these. For illustration,
person
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a person
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 will be able
take
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 a study that took put in 2021 in Uzbekistan, in which 57.3
percent
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 of the populace
lean
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leans
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 towards national clothing. Ultimately, I reckon that the clothes of the West have
negative
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a negative
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 impact than
positive
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a positive
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 to society.
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