A group of
people
opine that advertising is enormously successful at convincing
people
to buy goods,
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otherFix the agreement mistake
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view that it is so simple that
humanFix the agreement mistake
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no longer pay concentration to it.
I support
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proposition and will discuss relevant points along with precise examples and
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my view.
First
of all, different types of
advertisement
motivate us to buy
products
, they
providesChange the verb form
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types of merits of their
products
,
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a result,
people
are
influencingWrong verb form
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to buy their goods.
For example
, when consumers see
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advertisementFix the agreement mistake
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,
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Horlicks is useful for our health,
then
we influence to buy
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.
Secondly
, it is difficult to know every new
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in the market by us, so
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advertising
helpChange the verb form
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us to know
newChange preposition
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products
.
moreover
, it is
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howChange preposition
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to use it,
hence
,
people
are interestChange the verb form
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to buy
products
.
For instance
, noodles when came to the market, users knew by
advertisement
, after
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convinced to purchase
itCorrect pronoun usage
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.
However
,a significant number of
people
do not trust
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, they reckon that most
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the
advertisementFix the agreement mistake
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do not provide accurate information,
as a result
, they are not dependent on
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the advertisement
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advertisementFix the agreement mistake
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.
For example
, most
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the shampoo
advertisementFix the agreement mistake
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showingWrong verb form
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that different types of vitamins are present in their shampoo, but
people
are not getting
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resultFix the agreement mistake
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according to their
advertisement
.
most
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people
notAdd a missing verb
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interestReplace the word
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rate to watch
advertisementFix the agreement mistake
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because it
hamperChange the verb form
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their concentration and
interruptChange the verb form
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their main
taskFix the agreement mistake
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.
For example
, when
people
watch TV shows during
this
time any
advertisement
break their concentration that's why
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they do not concentrate
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even when
people
read newspapers they only focus
newsesChange the wording
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instead
of
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.
in conclusion, it is obvious that
people
are divided in their opinion
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their
planFix the agreement mistake
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.
however
, if
people
do not follow
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, the
advertisement
would not increase
. so from
former
are gaining more popularity.