In many countries people now wearing western clothes such as suits and jeans rathers than traditional clothing

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n my country,

people

dress

differently. Young peoples prefer to

dres

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dress

wester

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western

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clothes

and older

people

dress

in traditional

clothes

. I think about western

clothes

both

positive

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and

negative

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. I will tell you all the pros and cons in

this

essay and my opinion. Western clothing is very comfortable and stylish. If you take

jeans

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your jeans

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off, they are very simple and easy to do household chores. Jeans were originally intended for miners and

laborers

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because they are very comfortable. In American schools and

universites

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universities

, they wear uniforms and come to school in

cassual

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casual

clothes

For example

, a boy or girl from a poor family can not afford a classic school uniform

instead

they wear

cassual

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casual

clothes

. And that does not stop them from getting

education

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. Western clothing is not suitable for

people

in some countries. These

people

who

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apply

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live in

islamic

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Islamic

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counries

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countries

For example

, since 2005, Iranian women have not worn revealing

clothes

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apply

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but

instead

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,instead

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wear a black hijab.

People

should

dress

how they want. who like western

clothes

and who like traditional

clothes

dress

how you want. Do not think

people

will not

be discuss

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your

clothes

your

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apply

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clothes

. Fashion changes but

style

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not

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In many countries people now wearing western clothes such as suits and jeans rathers than traditional clothing

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