Your landlord has increased the amount of rent you pay every month and you don’t find it appropriate. Write a letter to the landlord and in your letter, Explain why you are writing Describe why you find the increase inappropriate What you want to do now--

Dear Sir BONNET, I am Sebastien Laniesse, one of your leaser and I wanted to let you know my thoughts according to the cost of the accommodation. In fact, I received an update from your accountant revealing a rent rising of 10% from

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month. I have been living in one of your properties for 2 years and you know that I always paid my due.

Furthermore

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, I had a few issues over my stay and I always took care of it myself

instead

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of putting you in charge. As a reminder, a had to face a tap leak and plug problems that I fixed by myself. To be honest, I really don't understand why you are rising the cost of living over here and I won't be able to afford it myself unfortunately. I was wondering if you could make an exception for a while at least.

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, it will let me some time to figure out how to manage it. I look forward to hearing from you and hopefully, we will find a solution. Yours faithfully, Sebastien LANIESSE.

laniesse.sebastien

Jan 20, 2023

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A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

180 words

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