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Learning to play team sports is an important part of a child's education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Children
 are the main goal of marriage, and they are the real investment of their
parents
 who get tired and save money to raise, so giving these
children
 the ideal childhood is a target the
parents
 seek
,
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 and
develop
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developing
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 their
fiteness
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fitness
 and
sport
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sports
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skills
 are
on
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one
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 of the issues that parent should keep in their minds. A huge proportion of
parents
 think that
learing
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teaching
 their
children
 to play team
sports
 at
this
 age is not a good idea, since it is wasting of time, in their
openion
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opinion
, kids should focus on their
study
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studies
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 now and grow other
skills
 like languages, arts, and maybe some
indevidauls
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individuals
individual
sports
 game, I can understand their point of view,
hence
 playing with other kids in
this
 age may let them face some troubles like being bullied, and dealing with
these issue
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 could very hard as well as expressing these problems to their
parents
, and
this
 may lead to series trouble in the future. to me, I strongly recommend
practicing
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play team
sports
 at a young age, there is nothing
can
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that can
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sharp
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 one
skills
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skill
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 like
communicate
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 with others and
face
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facing
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 many challenges , I can notice
this
 when I compare my
brother
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brother's
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 and sister's
children
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children's
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 characters, where my brother's
children
 did not learn to play team
sports
 game, so he seems to be isolated and struggling in expressing himself and his needing, the same for his
sports
 skill comparing to my sister's child who used to be happier and not an introvert at all,
in addition
 to his
noticable
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noticeable
 sport
skills
 developing. In
conclution
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conclusion
, I suggest that schools should keep
incourage
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encourage
children
 to
learning
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 to play
sports
, since
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a health
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health
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healthy
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 mind in
the
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a
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health
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healthy
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 body, any kind of sport will make
the
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a
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 difference in
thier
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their
 character and growth, and
the
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a
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 good investment in childhood, will
absolutly
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absolutely
shows
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show
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 good results in the future.
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