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Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

#people #students #vacation #year #vacations #support #choice
I guess, all
students
 like holidays. due to having a
lot
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 leisure to have fun with friends, play games and hang out
however
 long vacations might damage the learning process. in my opinion several short vacations in better than one long and in
this
 essay I will support my view with examples
firstly
, if
students
 have a long vacation they will get exhausted before the holiday
for example
 in our country we have the holiday for 3 months and we have a class for 9 months and after a long
time
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,time
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 most of the pupils get exhausted .
secondly
, all teachers like the
students
 may tired after a long time and can't teach correctly and
as a
result
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,result
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 they get angry soon and they don't listen to pupils' problems. to conclude, the basis of my view is based on
couple
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a couple
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 of reasons , I agree that
students
 should have several short vacations
instead
 of one long
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