Some people think that people in senior positions alone should make decisions in a business, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would say that people who are only

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senior

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the senior

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position

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should take a decision in a company.

However

, many argue that other

employees

also

should take

part

in

this

process.

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essay agrees with the latter point and will show that, despite the experience of managers in that field, junior

employees

might

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suggestions as they are

also

a

part

of an organization. To commence with, some believe that higher members of

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are alone take decisions.

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is because

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they work in the

comapany

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company

for many years and are more experienced. Knowledge of that field would help them to choose what is beneficial for

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success.

For instance

, in big companies,

top level

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management

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likely to indulge in judgements as they are trustworthy and gain expertise in work which only gives

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choice to the organization.

On the other hand

, there is no doubt that

employees

are

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part

of a firm and their success. If they are allowed to engage in

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the decision-making

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procedure, it

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an opportunity for them to share their ideas,

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their skills which

helps

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the firm in making

correct

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choice.

In addition

to that, it

also

saves time as asking

employees

for their opinion not only gives a different perspective to make

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a decision

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decision

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but

also

young peoples are more

freely

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to express themselves than higher management. In conclusion,

although

senior position people should take a decision as they are more experienced,

this

essay believes that

employees

should

also

involved

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in

this

process because they are

part

of a business and it gives them an opportunity to share their points.