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Nuclear energy is better than other sources of energy for meeting the ever-increasing global energy need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In a modern world with its highly increasing
energy
consumption
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 the issue of finding the best
energy
 resource is
highly
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a highly
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 important
one
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. Some people claim that nuclear
energy
 is better
then
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 others. In my opinion,
that is
 true, nuclear plans which produce electricity using nuclear fusion are much safer and can be built almost in all locations compared to plants using other
energy
 resources. The safety issue for the environment and
consequently
 for people
in general
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 is the main point which should be taken into consideration
while
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 comparing different types of
energy
 producers. And modern nuclear plants,
as
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I think, are the
safiest
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safest
 ones. They are
subjects
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 to
the
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strict government, scientific, and international
organisations
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 regulations, which provide
enormous
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an enormous
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 level of control over the processes while
producing
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.
Moreover
, the high level of
technologies
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technology
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which
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 scientific society has nowadays
allow
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 them to provide
the
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 comprehensive security level at
this
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 plants. Which, in turn, can prevent any
sorts
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 of errors in the process of production, and
therefore
 any detrimental consequences. Another reason why I consider them as a better source is
possibility
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the possibility
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 to built them at almost any place over the globe, except those areas with
high
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 probability of earthquakes and other natural disasters. Nuclear factories should not rely on gas pipelines to transport natural gas or railroads to transport coal.
Also
, they are not
depended
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 on natural phenomena
as
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 winds, sunshine, tides,
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and waterflows
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waterflows
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water flows
 in rivers,
thus
it
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 can be constructed even in countries
wich
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 do not have any of these. In conclusion, despite there
are
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 a lot of debate around
safety
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the safety
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 of nuclear
energy
, and
wether
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whether
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 people should develop
energy
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 sector
this
 way, I think that it is a better resource of safe and clean
energy
 for humankind.
Besides
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 it can be built in most countries on the Earth.
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