Your ordered product online. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. Write a letter

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing

this

letter to inform you about a faulty delivery made by your company.

Last

week, I bought a holiday dress for my friend's party from your online store. But when I received it, the dress was not what I ordered. At that time, I was shocked to see that because that dress was very important to me to wear to the party and I thought that the product had been replaced with other orders through sellers. I immediately called customer service and registered my complaint. I requested them to send me my order immediately but they still have not done it. At one point, I got frustrated and decided to write to you. I am asking you to send my order to me. I am looking forward to your immediate action in

this

regard. Yours sincerely Adam.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

144 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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