An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Mark Thank you so much for your letter, it feels like forever since we
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together for a
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of all, I'm so glad to hear that you decided to visit my region, it's going to be fun, I know that it's a bit difficult to find accommodation here, so I'm going to help you find somewhere to stay, I have a list of several hotels that you might like
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until you make a reservation, you can stay at my place. There are a lot of things to do, in the
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week I suggest you go sightseeing all over the city, there are interesting areas to visit, like the museum and the roman relics which are located just 10 km far from the city, and in the
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week, you can go hiking in the mountain, if you are cool with it, you can camp there for few days. The weather in my region is not so cold, so you don't have to bring heavy winter clothes, but a raincoat and an umbrella
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needed just in case, just bring your usual clothes and don't forget a sun hat because it can get pretty hot in the afternoons. Let me know if you need anything else. All the best Youcef
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