The charts above describe the result of a survey about education for adults. As we can see, these charts provide information about the reason for taking a study and percentage of sharing adult education costs.

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These two charts give information about the polling result in adult learning. The
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graph tells us the polling result of what motivates young people to study. While the
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chart illustrates the proportion of cost courses that should be shared in adult education. From the bar chart, we can see that the most common reason for adults taking education is because they are interested in the subject as 40% of them choose it. Following
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place is gaining a qualification with 38% of the participants considering it as their motivation. About 20% choose “helpful for the current job” while improving the prospect of promotion and enjoy learning or studying 20% result. The
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is being able to change jobs, about 12% of them choose it. The
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one, only 9% of people say that the reason they are taking an education is to meet people. The Pie chart shows that most of them agree that 40% of the course cost should be shared by an individual and 35% by an employer. But only 25% for taxpayers.

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