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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#people #students #study #science #food #school #time #subjects
In the modern world, many young
children
 are having
diabetics
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diabetes
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 and obesity
in
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at
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 an early age, and some
thinks
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think
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 that
education
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the education
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 system
are
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is
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 accountable for
this
 problem. Many people
believes
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believe
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 that
school
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schoolchildren
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children
 must learn
food
 science and cooking classes.
On the other hand
, others think they should spend their crucial time
in
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apply
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understanding valuable lessons. In
this
 essay, I will be explaining from both
point
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points
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 of
views
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view
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 and providing my opinion.
Firstly
, studying
about
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different types of meals, helps many students to keep their physical health stable. They will be more
consious
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conscious
 about their portion sizes and various
food
 intakes.
Secondly
, these studies help school
children
 to understand the nutritional value and nutrients present in their daily edibles.
Additionally
, the pupils will learn and enhances their cooking abilities,
also
 they can try many healthy alternatives for a particular recipe.
For example
, when a youngster leaves
to
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for
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 college, they will know how to prepare a meal without
an
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assistance, and they will know
a
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the
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 proper
food
 portions that they need to consume to stay healthy. Other subjects are equally important, and they learn about
food
 sciences from
few
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a few
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 areas of chemistry and biology. But, they cannot learn
deep
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deeply
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 into
vitamin
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the vitamin
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 values of different
food
. Major traditional subjects can add more educational value to a
scholers
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scholars
scholar's
 career, but that would not help their physical health.
Although
, learning other main topics can
also
 support their grades in their higher education. In conclusion,
food
 science and cooking can help
young
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the young
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 generation to maintain their bodies with a proper diet and they can stay fit without any
dietorial
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directorial
editorial
 problems. In my opinion, it is good that schools can introduce these lessons, as many young
children
in
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apply
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these days are facing
over weight
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overweight
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 and other health issues.
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