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Some people think that having a set retirement age for everybody regardless is unfair.They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at easy age.Do you agree or disagree. Which type of workers do you think should be benefit for early retirement. Give reason and example.

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People
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 in different professions usually start to receive pensions after they reach the
age
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 range of around 50-60. But, since it was ratified,
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 has been a point of controversy and faced much opposition from different groups of
workers
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. As they believe every profession should not be treated
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 when it comes to pensions and
workers
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 on some specific jobs should be allowed to retire early. In
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 essay, I will elaborate on how early retirement is necessary for some professions in comparison to some other jobs.
People
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, naturally, are limited to actively working for some specific time range when the
work
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 involves some physique. Labour
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 as those that
work
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 in construction,
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, need to always be physically fit to properly do their job. And by nature, we humans can't stay fit throughout the entirety of our lifetime; there is a limit. So, retiring
people
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 in these areas of the same
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 as
people
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 whose
work
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 has less physical involvement would be unfair. It will force
people
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 to
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 beyond their limits which might lead them to unnecessary health complications.
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 to its consequence on the
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, it might
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 affect the quality of
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.
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, software developers need to have the patience and innovative mind to keep coding and debugging for hours. and
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 is something that degrades as
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age
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. So, keeping old
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 on
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 type of
work
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 would highly affect the quality of the product that will be served. In conclusion, I believe different jobs should be accessed separately about the implications of
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 on both the
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 and the quality of
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 and assign different retirement ages
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. With
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, I believe great products can be produced and services delivered without harming or unnecessarily forcing
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.
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