A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Dave I hope

this

letter finds you well.

Firstly

, thanks again for looking after my dog. Below is what I would like you to do,

however

, if you have any problems just give me a call. As per our arrangement, can you please do the following, When you take the dog out in the morning can you please open the window, in the dining room,

to where he sleeps

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Please walk him twice a day, unless you want to clean up his shit!! Please feed him after each walk, his food is beside the fridge, in packets (or pouches). Instructions are on the back. Please combine them with fresh meat, which, if possible, could you buy every day. There is money on the table for the meat, and coffee, for when you are out walking.

Lastly

, you don’t need to do any cleaning, but, could you vacuum the dog’s blanket at the end of the week? Yours Sincerely

Submitted by sashko.holodniy on Sat Jan 21 2023

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