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University education should be free to anyone, regardless of their income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#university #education #anyone #income
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The table represents the percentage of
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' number studying in four different types of secondary
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 during the period between 2000 and 2009. Overall, it can be seen that Voluntary controlled
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 have the highest
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 of student attendance decreasing among the four different types of
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 during these 9 years, while the community
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 scored the highest
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 of
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 during the same duration. In detail, Voluntary controlled
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 started at the highest
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 of
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 attendance at 52% in 2000,
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 a declining
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happened
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 2005, and because of
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continuous
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, the
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 of attendance in 2009 reached 20%,
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 the other hand, community
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 have the least
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proportion
preparation
 of
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 equal with Specialist
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 at 12% in 2000, but a fast increasing happened to
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 during the nine years put them on the top of other types at 58%. Specialist
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whitnessed
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witnessed
 a percentage of
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 at 12%,
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% respectively in 2000, both
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 experienced a
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 during the
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 5 years to become 11%,12%, until these proportions settled at 10%, 12% in 2009, so the specialist
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 became the least favourite type of
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 to attend by
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 at that year.
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