You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres *offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to you regarding a recently published article in your newspaper. I agree that

town

centres in metropolitan cities resemble to be quite similar in infrastructure. Most of these places have similar high-end shops and they all have parking issues.

However

, the

town

centre of my city is very different from that of any other place. It is designed in concentric circles, where local artisans are provided with the innermost space and swanky showrooms are only allowed on the circumference of the area.

Additionally

, there is ample parking space, constructed underground and expanded to two levels. Our

town

centre is like no other in the country. It is a vibrant place, always ready to welcome guests. I am offering to be the guide to the writer of

this

article to explore my

town

and expand his/her knowledge of the

town

centre. Thank you for your time. Warm regards, Syed Abuzar

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