Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is

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generally

thought that it is the duty of the

parents

to teach their peers how to be valuable members of the

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community

while others believe that it is the responsibility of

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. In

this

essay,I will look at

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both sides of

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the argument

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and give my opinion. There is no doubt that family guardians are the

first

and foremost teacher for every child as well as

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the home

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is

also

the former place in order to

to

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teach

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kids moral, ethical and social values because

childern

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children

spend

thier

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their

the

first

2-3 years( as

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a toddler

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) in the

home

with their families before going to school.

Moreover

, whatever is happening in the family, how family members are behaving with others. Peers start understanding and

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those activities in their

mind

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and try to do the same. So that,

parents

are the

first

to help

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children

what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world.

On the other hand

, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just

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home

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the home

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. Once a child goes to

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school

, they are entering a wider

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community

where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their

parents

do at

home

. At school,

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children

will experience working and living

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with

people from a whole variety of backgrounds from

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the

wider society.

This

experience should teach them how to

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with each other. Overall, In my point of view, both are equally important

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their own place. Where

parents

help them to understand how to obey rules and respect elders as well as teachers help them to understand how to

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and supportive .